Module 5: Writing an 'About' Section That Converts
- Structure an About section using a hook, body, and call-to-action
- Write in first person with a natural, human tone
- Avoid common About-section mistakes like generic buzzwords
The About section is the only place on a LinkedIn profile for real storytelling, yet most people either leave it blank or fill it with generic buzzwords ('passionate, driven, results-oriented team player') that say nothing distinctive. A structure that works: open with a specific hook (a concrete result, an unusual path into the field, or a clear statement of who you help), follow with two or three short paragraphs on your experience and approach written in first person and plain language, and close with a clear call-to-action (what you're open to -- new roles, freelance projects, collaborations -- and how to reach you). First person ('I help small businesses...') reads as more credible and human than third person ('John helps small businesses...'), which can feel distant or even machine-written when used on your own profile.
1. Writing an About section in first person is generally preferred because it:
2. A strong About section typically opens with: